Entry Stats: 4.85 Stars by 7 users with 8 comments 295 views
for my sweet angel I would die. I'd pick the stars from the sky.
and give them all just for you to let you know. how much I love you. My Angel I'll love you all eternity. I would do anything for you sweetie. I wrote this poem. from my heart to let you know. Your my sweetheart. Please stay with me forever. take my hand and let's be together. lets fly high up to the heavens. above and show everyone. we are in love.
Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 06:49 pm
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I love how you just image the love. Ss many people word it in the most cliché ways. This is refreshing
Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you — like music to the musician... — or else it is nothing, an empty, formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their nots and explanations.
- -F. Scott Fitzgerald
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i really like this one. it shows that you love this person. and it makes me feel like you would go through hell and back just to be with this person. its a short poem but it has enough meaning for someone to get the point of how you feel. I like the description you put when you said pick the stars from the sky. that also means to me that you would give this person the stars moon and sun. i love it
I didn't really like the sentence structure here, but the sentiments were well put and excellent to read. An enjoyable, tender journal that touched the heart and was truly heartwarming - I enjoyed reading this.