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Similar Tears

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: February 24, 2009 at 04:52 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Love | Romance | Sad
Entry Stats: 4.38 Stars by 9 users with 10 comments 270 views
Similar Tears 
We're old souls in new life baby they gave us a new life and learn Some time to touch old friends and still return Our paths have crossed and parted This love affair was started long long ago This love surives the ages in it's story lives the pages fill them up may ours turn slow our love is a strong love baby we give it all and still receive and so empty arms we must beleive all souls last forever so we need never goodbye A kiss When I must go... No tears in time ... We kiss ... Hello


Last Modified: July 20, 2010 at 11:31 pm

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Comments & Reviews ( X 9)

elphie
May 26, 2012

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Beautifully written.
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Tjejma
August 22, 2010

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You let me remember the old times, when I was a silly girl and wanted just to be kissed. Now everything is complicated.. hahaha thank heavens there are peoms like these ones that ease the day of the heave hearted.
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FrankReeves
August 17, 2010

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It probably is a good poem, but I'm lost in translation.
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elfqueena
July 24, 2010

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AWESOME
awe this was so good and I understood the way you made it flow into one line from another . loved it was so sweet and emotional . awesome job son
you have so much raw talent its so sweet love ya,mom
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ceyesandhlies
September 06, 2009

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Ah-may-zing
i love it, i love it, i love it.
words can berly describe it its that good!

keep writing, thanks for this wonerful piece.
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fearstearspain
June 30, 2009

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good flow .
good sstory line.
love the words used and how they are used.
short and sweet gets right the point.

keep writing.
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coenraadvliet
June 11, 2009

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Storyteller
Your a wonderful storyteller. Same theme. Different story. Love this overlapping feeling. Every poem flows over in to another. Love the structure of your poetry. You have grasped it perfectly. Every writer has his own way and poetry is suppose to be freedom and allow you to write it your way

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you — like music to the musician... — or else it is nothing, an empty, formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their nots and explanations.
- -F. Scott Fitzgerald

(Remember to return the favour and give a review back and be brutally honest. Nothing to learn from fake smiles)
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brittany003
February 25, 2009

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love it
really nice words that you put into this one. and this girl your in love with is really lucky cuz if i could get my man to write to me like that id have it made lol. but i love the deep words and how you put them in th perfect place.
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MindofaPoet
February 25, 2009

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i think you could have had a better flow...but it was nice..nice job
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JoanDZombie
February 24, 2009

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um ya ok...I really like the run on sentences Thunderstorm...and even tho it may not be making sence to other people I still love your work! Keep it up!!! and hold your head up high!
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