Entry Stats: 4.38 Stars by 9 users with 10 comments 270 views
We're old souls in new life baby they gave us a new life and learn Some time to touch old friends and still return Our paths have crossed and parted This love affair was started long long ago This love surives the ages in it's story lives the pages fill them up may ours turn slow our love is a strong love baby we give it all and still receive and so empty arms we must beleive all souls last forever so we need never goodbye A kiss When I must go... No tears in time ... We kiss ... Hello
Last Modified: July 20, 2010 at 11:31 pm
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You let me remember the old times, when I was a silly girl and wanted just to be kissed. Now everything is complicated.. hahaha thank heavens there are peoms like these ones that ease the day of the heave hearted.
Your a wonderful storyteller. Same theme. Different story. Love this overlapping feeling. Every poem flows over in to another. Love the structure of your poetry. You have grasped it perfectly. Every writer has his own way and poetry is suppose to be freedom and allow you to write it your way
Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you — like music to the musician... — or else it is nothing, an empty, formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their nots and explanations.
- -F. Scott Fitzgerald
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really nice words that you put into this one. and this girl your in love with is really lucky cuz if i could get my man to write to me like that id have it made lol. but i love the deep words and how you put them in th perfect place.