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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: March 18, 2005 at 07:30 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Humor | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 544 views

"Don't Mention It!"  

Don’t Mention It

“Can I read you this?”
I asked, feeling all high on bliss.
This bliss is my kiss.
Writing is my oasis,
And reading it to another,
My long cool drink of water.

‘Well you might not have
My undivided attention.”

“Not even a bit?
…Well never mind me.”

“Don’t mention it!”

It seems not all are as enthusiastic,
About what the poetry fanatic,
Has been up to over there.
And I gotta admit-
I don’t give much of a care
To what’s being watched on,
That evil television;
The lobotomy incision-
That they are doing as well.

“It’s just a story I wanted to tell
But never mind me a bit.”

“Hey it’s O.K.,
Don’t mention it!”

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April 10, 2005
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March 31, 2005
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Hey don't mention it! This is Cyberhyme. And I appreciate you commenting so much on my poetry. It means alot like you wouldn't believe. I'm 18 btw~ one thing. How did you get your font all green and "Comic Sans MS" I believe it was?

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March 27, 2005
lol Cute I like it

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March 18, 2005
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cool poem Ivie..hehe don't mention it....thanks for sharing

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