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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: March 17, 2005 at 08:12 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 525 views

A Stall in Time  

A Stall in Time

Black as night with the subtle glow of a great storm moving in
Your eyes tell me a treasure of tales big and small
Thereís nothing you havenít done
Nowhere you havenít been
And youíve met everyone there is to meet
Iím finding out youíve done it all.

Blue as day with the heat of mid-day sun on my skin
When on your journeys I wish you would call
You are doing everyone but me
You are everywhere but here
And so many more people you desire to be with
In love with you I dare not fall.

Flushed as a Peach on the outside and ripened from within
Your hands play with me coyly and into you I befall
Into your arms Iím the only one
There is no one here but us
And your only desire in the world is to undo me
Time stands still to a stall

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March 27, 2005
I like it, very nicely written

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March 18, 2005
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aww sweet romance wrap into time itslef...good job..thanks for sharing I love it...

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