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Author: iviedoeloves

Created: March 15, 2005 at 05:46 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Humor | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 3.75 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 458 views

Rhyming With Orange

Rhyming with Orange

Is anybody out there?
I made a rhyme with 'orange'.
It goes like this…

I like fishing at night
The lake is cold and bleak
But this is not our only plight
Tired of dropping our oars in the drink
Or amidst the tackle, rods, and fish goo
‘Cos we’re blind as bats
And as impatient as rats
I figured there was only one thing to do
We did one then the other oar hinge
And painted them both neon orange!


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March 27, 2005

lol It's funny I like it

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jzachmann
March 18, 2005

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I totally loved it. I love the way that you work the animals into your poems. thanks for sharing.

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BobQuinn
March 17, 2005

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Good idea, does it work?

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milligan
March 15, 2005

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A great color! Also a good chuckle! Thanks!

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TempestOfNature
March 15, 2005

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you tackle with this one..orange can't ryhme but you manage to find a way...lol..thanks for sharing

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