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Author: iviedoeloves

Created: March 13, 2005 at 11:56 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Sad | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 479 views

Vanilla Ice cream

Vanilla Ice Cream

I believe in long good-byes
Vanilla ice cream
And torrid crys
Ibelieve this parting of ours
Is smarting my heart so
That I'm seeing stars
This is a bad conck on the head
So that I just want to lie here in bed
There's nothig really to get up for
Unless that's you
Knocking on my door
Unless that's you
Calling on the phone
I don't want to talk to anyone else
I'd rather be alone
This parting of ours
Is proving to be tough
We didn't say good-bye
Quite long enough
And eating this
Vanilla ice cream alone
Can really be tough
It ony reminds me
How far away you are
Like a bad conck on the head
It's making me see stars


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Comments & Reviews

March 14, 2005

This is cute work, still I had a hard time following the flow. You are getting better and better just keep that pen a burning.
Take Care

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