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Vanilla Ice cream
Vanilla Ice Cream
I believe in long good-byes Vanilla ice cream And torrid crys Ibelieve this parting of ours Is smarting my heart so That I'm seeing stars This is a bad conck on the head So that I just want to lie here in bed There's nothig really to get up for Unless that's you Knocking on my door Unless that's you Calling on the phone I don't want to talk to anyone else I'd rather be alone This parting of ours Is proving to be tough We didn't say good-bye Quite long enough And eating this Vanilla ice cream alone Can really be tough It ony reminds me How far away you are Like a bad conck on the head It's making me see stars
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March 14, 2005
This is cute work, still I had a hard time following the flow. You are getting better and better just keep that pen a burning. Take Care
Depressed people can gain a lot of weight, some eat ice cream, some drink beer. Some store it on the belly. some on the rear. I was glad to be rid of the bitch but smarted like you, at being rejected. But I'm over it now, and seventy pounds heavier!