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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: March 12, 2005 at 10:44 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 421 views

Cobalt Clarity  

The Moment of Clarity

The moment of clarity may come to life
Letting go of holding on to self-inflicted strife
Saying farewell to the many fair weather friends
And lending yourself to new acquaintances
Dropping your guard to new possibilities
And opening your door to new opportunities
You get a new view stepping up off your knees
Rub your eyes and get real with what you see
But are you who you thought you’d be
Working for the world to be your oyster now
Or is that worth your soul anyhow
What is worth it to you?
To fake it till you make it last a lifetime
Just what would you do?
What is your favorite pastime?
What are your favorite hobbies babe?
Eating poppies or robbing graves
Could be there’s a lot of you
Living within me
Looking back at us
In the mirror in which we bask
There are truthful yet torrid questions
In the eyes that need to be asked
If you’re being real
They’ll bring you to pure honesty
This brings you back round
To the moments of clarity

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March 13, 2005
i loved it, great write!

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March 13, 2005
Another great one from IVIE!! LOL It has a good flow to it

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March 13, 2005
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I like this poem things like this have been running through my mind all the time thats why i decided to pick up a pen and do something about. And this is what I do best write , write and write some more!...thanks for sharing Ivie

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