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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: March 11, 2005 at 07:30 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Horror | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.8 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 414 views

Why I Don't Sleep  

Why I Donít Sleep


In the silent darkness
Of the steely night
Moments come and go
At the speed of light
Itís hard to be conscious
In this state of sleep
But every now and then
Wake to take a peep
Some dreams are like crystals
Made of healing and warmth
And some become nightmares,
Demons feeding at your heart
You feel weightless at first,
But thatís just a disguise,
To lull you into acceptance
While you they commence to paralyze
Chowing on your soul
Torturing your brain
Leaving you without a breathe
Straining to scream in silent vain
But they sit on your chest
So you canít move to wake
Fear takes your voice away
While everything is at stake
I hear raspy sounds
And realize itís coming from me
Struggling to regain control
Another day of life to see


© iviedoeloves - all rights reserved


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angela
January 28, 2008
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Great sometimes when i'm in a half awake state i do fell as if something is there with me waiting for me. Did you know that in some cultural belief's that when a person believe's their's an entity with them that if you ask it out loud saying in God's name who are you what is your show yourself. What ever is suppose to be there is suppose not only show itself to u but tell you who what and why it is there. creepy i know and two ur never suppose to say demons name out loud unless u want to go in battle with it. i know this is useless fact's that u might not wanta hear but stuff like this intruge me to know end.


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andrewDrake
March 13, 2005
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really, really good. keep up the good work.


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milligan
March 12, 2005
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Unusual, distinctively yours, and well done!


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Purple_Star
March 11, 2005
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Pretty good, but I just see lots of words without a lot of feeling, really..


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TempestOfNature
March 11, 2005
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i feel that way sometimes when i can't sleep..i really don't get any sleep i stay up and go on the computer for houyrs reading writing. Thanks for sharing


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