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Author: iviedoeloves

Created: March 11, 2005 at 07:30 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Horror | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 3.8 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments 374 views

Why I Don't Sleep

Why I Don’t Sleep

In the silent darkness
Of the steely night
Moments come and go
At the speed of light
It’s hard to be conscious
In this state of sleep
But every now and then
Wake to take a peep
Some dreams are like crystals
Made of healing and warmth
And some become nightmares,
Demons feeding at your heart
You feel weightless at first,
But that’s just a disguise,
To lull you into acceptance
While you they commence to paralyze
Chowing on your soul
Torturing your brain
Leaving you without a breathe
Straining to scream in silent vain
But they sit on your chest
So you can’t move to wake
Fear takes your voice away
While everything is at stake
I hear raspy sounds
And realize it’s coming from me
Struggling to regain control
Another day of life to see

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angela
January 28, 2008

Helpful:

Great sometimes when i'm in a half awake state i do fell as if something is there with me waiting for me. Did you know that in some cultural belief's that when a person believe's their's an entity with them that if you ask it out loud saying in God's name who are you what is your show yourself. What ever is suppose to be there is suppose not only show itself to u but tell you who what and why it is there. creepy i know and two ur never suppose to say demons name out loud unless u want to go in battle with it. i know this is useless fact's that u might not wanta hear but stuff like this intruge me to know end.

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