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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 12, 2008 at 07:27 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Romance | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 4.64 Stars by 7 users with 5 comments and 281 views

Dragonfly~  






Dragonfly~

I came across a dragonfly
All footloose and fancy free~
He wrote a simple note of love
And put it where I would see~
I was completely astonished
It just came out of the blue~
Not sure where it came from
Then he said “It's from me to you.”~
Unbelieving of my blessedness
I said, “I'm sure that couldn't be.”~
While contemplating who wrote it
He said, “Oh yes, it's from me!”~
My heart leaped ten feet high
I felt my eyes brim with joy~
For I'd been praying to God
To be one with this beautiful boy~
Now here he was confessing his love
With the power of the written word~
That was the beginning for me
Of the most cherished love song heard~
I still have that little love note
“You are loved.” is what was written~
With those tremendous words he
captured me, and still I am smitten.~

Iviedoe 2005


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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



LuciaElisa
March 24, 2009
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Draw a smile on my face as well =D Really cute!!!


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Dark_Death
January 22, 2009
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WOW
quite an original and exquisite poems, but i have to wonder.. why do you have a ~ after every other line? it made it harder for my poor eyes to read.


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Deadserious
January 19, 2009
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interesting
there are a lot of messages in that poem.bravo


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TheTinGirl
January 06, 2009
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Amazing.
I love this piece, it's honest, yet imaginative. I love that it has sort of a child like voice...a fairy tale setting that really brings out the simplicity of being happy from a few words of love brought by another person. The dragonfly metaphor was something I could have never came up with either. Sorry no crits, just love!


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atomiccolm
January 06, 2009
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wow
i love the use of rhyme and the dragonfly metaphor really gives it a cutting edge... simply gorgeous


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roselora
December 23, 2008
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good


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salman_siddiqui4
December 13, 2008
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good keep on writing


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