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♥ "this is perfect" ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: December 09, 2008 at 12:59 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Erotica | Romance | Love
Entry Stats: 4.25 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 351 views
"this is perfect" 



“this is perfect”

honestly
all I can think of is your warm kisses
your warm breath on my hot body
chewing on my soul stretching and
manipulating my heart of hearts
my breast heaves as you push
your length into me. my body
aches as my thighs lift my feet
above my head. i can hear your
sounds of passion and that you
said to me “this is perfect” and
before we are done here on this
awesome journey, i want to peak
with you, with you of inside me
in this realm beside me riding me
honestly

iviedoe 2008

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

paSSionsburn
April 29, 2012

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Sizzlin!
what a cool erotica..There are some lines I love.."chewing on my soul stretching.." That is a great line..wow! BW44
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elphie
December 03, 2010

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Wonderfully written. Keep writing . I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
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TempestOfNature
January 31, 2009

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its been a while
Well it has been a while since I read your work. I think you meant speak not peak to you but I knew what u meant. Yea this is exciting...very I love
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Klove112
January 19, 2009

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beautiful
Your writting is very creative and aassume you have been doing this a while. All I can say is do waht you do and keep it up.
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tamsgogo
December 09, 2008

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your world
When it comes to collaborative 'riding' it must be with consideration.
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