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♥ ~~take it to heart~~ ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: December 07, 2008 at 01:07 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Contemporary
Entry Stats: 4.7 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments 245 views
~~take it to heart~~ 
~~take it to heart~~

you are my life and I love my life
you make my world go round about
the atmosphere of my universe is sweet
and I know all of this without a doubt

your guitar grooves me
your voice surly moves me
your breathing does soothe me

take it to heart
take it to heart

my intention is not to crowd you
or place myself in your face
no need for you to run scared now
i'm not wanting to invade your space

I am just being honest with you
conveying what is on my mind
I have no fear of repercussion
your understanding I hope to find

you groove me
you move me
you soothe me

take it to heart
take it to heart

take me into your heart

iviedoe 2008

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

brittanyleigh
January 28, 2011

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I definitely agree that this should be a song. I like this alot.
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Amandamic21
July 08, 2009

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great
I have to agree...this is like a really great song.
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abbylovesmichael
April 30, 2009

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so could be a song...I would sing to this if it came on the radio..It's got such groove, to steal your word. I love this!
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emk69
December 08, 2008

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Music to my ears
This poem could be a great song
I really like your honest flow
of yourself
refreshing
Great Job !
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shanicsch3
December 08, 2008

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This is absolutely beautiful!!!
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Sourav
December 08, 2008

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It seems more like a song then poem to me. But I must say that this is very well written. I enjoyed reading it! Wonderful!
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