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♥ ~~ as i feel now ~~ ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: December 05, 2008 at 05:34 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Romance | Love | Erotica
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 237 views

~~ as i feel now ~~ 


~~ as I feel now ~~

loving leveling living
pushing pulling giving
please take what is mine
it has always been yours
my heart my mind
my body my time
take it all for hours
let me let you
go round my body
yearning so very much
to feel your intimate touch
sex me up my love
you blue-eyed dove
i will not say no
that you very much so
belong right here
feeling me feeling you
my mind is ever clear
and i do know
that i am so
very much in
love with you
now where do i end
for i beg you to begin
now that you are aware
of how very much i care
you could say that i am the
bravest of the brave
you i will forever crave
come whatever
come what may
i know i will
for all time stay
as i feel now
as i feel now
as I feel now

iviedoe 2006

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Comments & Reviews

Amandamic21
July 08, 2009

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Great description
Really great , classy description of loving ang giving.

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Sourav
December 08, 2008

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Good!
Very passionate and exciting poem. It has a good flow and motion. I liked the lines and the descriptions. Interesting!

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