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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 05, 2008 at 01:45 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Romance | Lyrics
Upload Stats: 3 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 435 views

~~~parade of time~~~  

~~~the parade of time~~~

if our time together could be viewed
from an up and far away place above
a sparkling line would be be revealed
a parade in the time that is our love

movement in compliment each to the other
in subtle shifts glistening as it shines in slide
symbiotic in nature and naturally nurturing
curves linger clearly in the line as they glide

a ribbon of silk and sea sand
being as simple as milk and
entwined as glove is to hand
keeping secrets we understand

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December 19, 2008
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I really like this one i don't know why but it just intrigues me. Excellent job.

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