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♥ ~~~in dreams~~~ ♥

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Author: iviedoeloves

Created: November 06, 2008 at 06:07 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Contemporary | Non Fiction | Fantasy

Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 365 views

~~~in dreams~~~

In dreams

promises promises
hoping they'll be kept
sand thru my fingers
in dreams while I slept

lets go to the ocean
and feel the breeze today
the air is salty and good
blows the clouds away

birds softly gliding high
baby blue just laughed
promises aren't ever lies
just a silly skillful craft

iviedoe 2008

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Comments & Reviews

BobQuinn
July 25, 2009

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WOW

The only work this one needs is publishing, very nice indeed. Marvelous imagery and insightful reading of what promises are, love it.

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Amandamic21
July 08, 2009

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Nice piece

Dreams are amazing things...you can travel anywhere or experience anything through dreams. Nice writing, nice and gentle, sweet and imaginative.

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HPGreg
December 04, 2008

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Very Nice

I liked your poem, it has a nice flow, with good form.
I liked the ending, just a silly skillful craft.

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Sourav
November 26, 2008

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Creative

Very interesting and very good!

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