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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: November 02, 2008 at 06:12 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Contemporary | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 409 views

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Picture posing~~

sun suits car-coats and booties
was the outfit in the start of my age
jeans, tank-tops, sweatpants and sandals
are now the iron-clad armor of this sage

in the days that i'm growing older
it's taken this much time just to grow up
at least i'm hoping this is so
there are still seams of sorted threads to sew up

but I've learned that knowledge is not wisdom
unless truthful experience proves to you the tide
just because you've heard them all say it's so
doesn't mean it's a genuine article, bona- fide

but let not the moments go by
behind the ruse of sorting it all out
for we all are born with numbered days
a closer look shows not enough to count

I know a man must make his own way in life
but will you take me and make me at your side?
let our time always be now in this today
days as pearls are strung but humans have always died

for you....... for me...
life's vast treasures are lying in wait
so charge the hill-tops from valleys green
to live now and give now what does satiate

iviedoe 2008

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November 03, 2008
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November 03, 2008
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You... tend to write with a sense of wisdom, in a style that is older than commonly used in contemporary poetry. Altogether I enjoyed this poem, though I gave you a 4.5 because some of the Iomic Pandameter elements were out of sync with rythem. Nevertheless, I really liked this, and when I have more time to devote to reviewing your work (its 0331AM here) I will likely read and comment on as much of your writing as I can.

Thank you for sharing this, and I hope to hear from you.

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