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♥ Jon & Jen ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: March 02, 2005 at 01:21 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 3 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 321 views
Jon & Jen 
There's places to be at certain times,
And there's places you'd never want to find.
When you came home
And expected everything to be
"Pick up where we left off."
I was miffed but my spine went soft.
And what was I supposed to say
To those deep blue eyes?
I should have seen it coming,
But still it was a surprise.
Could you really be like you were
In the begining?
When everything was a bowl full of cherries,
chocolate syrup,whip cream and berries.
I guess I have no choice now
Due to my reaction,
But to let it run its course again...
Perhaps you'll find some traction.
This time don't do me wrong!
I won't be so soft,
I'll be rude, I'll be strong!
So you'll be here one minute...
But I promise the next I'll make you be gone!

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Laocoon
March 02, 2005

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Quite a good poem. Good job!
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