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♥ Excellence ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: February 28, 2005 at 04:49 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 391 views

Excellence 
Excellence

The whole world
Can see
What I see
In him~
Hes sporting:
Charisma,
And charm.
But not:
So youd think.
He must:
Know it~
He works:
So hard~
And comes:
Home with,
A Coke,
And a smile~
For me.


Ivie Doe


Author Notes
it's the small things that turn me inside- out.

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TempestOfNature
March 02, 2005

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hehehe..i like this poem your man comes home to you with a coke and a smile how sweet..

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