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♥ ~~~As You Determine~~~ ♥

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Author: iviedoeloves

Created: October 07, 2008 at 05:30 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Friendship | Contemporary | Inspirational

Entry Stats: 4.33 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 256 views

~~~As You Determine~~~

As You Determine~~~

Up comes the sun
And shining is the day
Washing the fear
Of the darkness away

Let tears of yesterday dry
As you begin to suck it up
With calm remembering
Of your blessed flowing cup

So kick up your heels today
Shrug off yesterday's trials and strife
For as rich and vast as you know it
Each day could always be the end of life

You will find as good in this day
As you determine it to be
It's a matter of perspective and ratio
In good to bad of what you see

But no matter what is done or said
And no matter how hard you try
This I must genuinely admit
Things can just simply go awry

So kick up your heels today
Shrug off yesterday's trials and strife
For as rich and vast as you know it
Each day could always be the end of life

Iviedoe 10.07.08

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Comments & Reviews

poetpat
August 01, 2010

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Smart message

You have really captured it well in your piece of writing the importants of living each day like it is your last one. Also you decide what you will make of your day; it is in your own hands. Forget what happened yesterday , as it is behind us , now concetrate on today and enjoy it and live it. Liked it a lot. Good message.

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Amandamic21
July 08, 2009

Helpful:

So true...

This is such a true part of life. We never know when our time will come. We should cherish each moment. And live each day as though it were our last. You have given this message in a very gentle...yet very strong message...which is very wise.

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pashunrose39
October 07, 2008

Helpful:

This is very nice piece. Love the flow of the words. The message given is one to be taken by all.

Pashunrose39

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