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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: September 23, 2008 at 09:56 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Romance | Humor
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 334 views

-xOx- kisses -xOx-  

kisses ~~~

kisses, kissing, kissable, kiss, kissed ~
no amount of the word comes close to the cases,
of the spots and whereabouts of pleasurable places ~
in which they are appreciated and enjoyed
used in the tickle, the tease, the tempt and the toyed !
hugs, snugs, snickers and giggles ~
you make my world go round in wiggles !
north to south,
when you use your mouth ~
i float like the moon.
i sigh, shiver, quiver, and swoon ~
as far as from east to west,
it's a given; you're the best,
as sure as the sun rises and sets ~
you are surely as good as it gets !!!

iviedoe 2006

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September 27, 2008
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I like

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September 24, 2008
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very melodic and beautiful, you really captured everyhting that's wonderful about a kiss, I loved your imagery and the flow of the words,, well done

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September 23, 2008
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I couldn't put the words together any better then u did.. Sounds like a very great idea to feel & share them with ur special one....

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