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♥ ~~~ the mocking clock ~~~ ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: August 11, 2008 at 10:19 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Humor | Love | Sad
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 279 views
~~~ the mocking clock ~~~ 

~~~the mocking clock~~~


i do
i do
i would what i should~
and one day perhaps we could,
be hooked into what is true.
for now i an rooked into being blue.

cant stand being in the now~
they crawl by so damningly slow,
clock mocking me without ceasing or a bow~
the only things i have about these times to show:

flesh that aches with a pounding~
ears longing for your footsteps resounding~
brain on a frazzled fritz~
AND A CLOCK SMASHED INTO TINY LITTLE BITS!!!!

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miracleboy
October 08, 2008

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I like your Poems
I have been reading some of your poetry it's really very nice.
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