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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: February 22, 2005 at 04:57 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 525 views

No, thats It...  

No, that’s it.

Walk and talk with me just a bit
I like to see the eyes be real
even if they’re lit
That’s when the telling of tales
Comes out with a fidget
Or maybe the long hot summer night
Will prove you’re not an idiot
Still sucking on the world’s tit
And being everything
You think they’re saying is totally it
It causes me to stress out
Grunt and pout
Over the pressing in
Over the latest greatest new skin
Today’s brand new spin
Is just about worth a mint in tin

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Comments & Reviews

February 25, 2005
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This is excellent work, still I see it as you leaving the last line off. Off course it is your work and it is up to you. I just want to say I am proud of you and all that you have done. Let me know if there is anything I can help you with.
Take Care

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February 24, 2005
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I enjoy this one..i guess to say no thats not it..its something else that this world or people don't know I guess by reading this they will know

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