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No, thats It...
No, that’s it.
Walk and talk with me just a bit I like to see the eyes be real even if they’re lit That’s when the telling of tales Comes out with a fidget Or maybe the long hot summer night Will prove you’re not an idiot Still sucking on the world’s tit And being everything You think they’re saying is totally it It causes me to stress out Grunt and pout Over the pressing in Over the latest greatest new skin Today’s brand new spin Is just about worth a mint in tin
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This is excellent work, still I see it as you leaving the last line off. Off course it is your work and it is up to you. I just want to say I am proud of you and all that you have done. Let me know if there is anything I can help you with. Take Care