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♥ be on my side~~~ ♥

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Author: iviedoeloves

Created: July 22, 2008 at 02:44 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Personal | Friendship | Contemporary

Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 305 views

be on my side~~~

be on my side~~~

as we all have our gifts,
so our faults are laid bare~
dont have to look too close.
to see them all there.
and if you must gaulk~
do it with care.
linger not too long,
in a stupefied stare~
for it might embarrass you,
to find that i wear,
all of them with pride,
and a certain bit of flare~
my freakishness i've learned,
i simply just cannot hide.
badges of weirdness i've earned~
so please for me simply abide,
just play along and be on my side.

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Comments & Reviews

ErikTyni
July 24, 2008

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good

this is really good, it has a great flow, it ain't hard to read and that's really good and you find good words and mixes them good my favourite is "as we all have our gifts,
so our faults are laid bare" beautiful written good work take care //Erik

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Fuzzball
July 24, 2008

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Nice!

I can definitely relate, keep up the great work!

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simon
July 24, 2008

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love!

you are a great writer. loved it so.remind me of the way i write alot of my poems

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