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♥ When I Die ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: February 22, 2005 at 11:33 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Spiritual | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 412 views

When I Die 
When I die

When I shed this earthen tent,
I hope some will read my cries of~
*These words I have carefully rent;*
Joy, and pain, and rage, and love

'Hopefully they’ll dare,
To turn all my pages,
With curiosity, and care.
*As one would the sages*'

There’s hope, and faith~
Beyond the very first few;
In my songs of the old,
And songs I made new.

For it is a gentle simplicity~
Always, I stand firm on this:
I am covered in the blood of~
Jesus; a name of pure bliss!

For all praise and glory ~
Goes to the Creator of all...
...*Great and small*```
Our Father in heaven;
To Whom I call:
My Daddy, my Papa~
*I did not stumble, stutter, nor fall*

ivie doe

Author Notes
jesus lives

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January 22, 2009

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hey thats really good......nice job/........
keeep it up

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February 24, 2005

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I wonder sometimes when i die who to call but I guess I will not know that yet..Good job ive

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February 22, 2005

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Very good poem, truthful and deep, good job

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