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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 19, 2008 at 04:28 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Romance | Philosophy
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 477 views

>>>The Gift Of Giving<<<  

~~the gift of giving~~

hopes and dreams
and familiar things~
oh, but to hear the call
when the night-bird sings!

loops of desires
that stoke the fires~
oh, but to hear the call
of the night-bird's choir!

songs of lust and passion~
kindness and compassion~
tenderness full in fashion~
sparkling stars and rockets flashin'!

yes,to be in ear shot,
just a hittin' that special spot~
when the night-birds sing,
it's a magnificent and wondrous thing~

it's a place which many have sought~
where you find the gift of giving is taught.
when the night-bird's song is actually caught,
it is a priceless state that can't be bought...

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August 26, 2011
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beautiful lyrics
Soothing and very talented

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July 19, 2008
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Hi there Ivie its been a long time since I seen you around. How you been? It's great to see your work again excellent as always you always bring a gift and it keeps on giving

Hope I get to see you around!

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July 19, 2008
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very co moving .like how its written ..and the meaning was excellent to learn the gift of giving!!! nice

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