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♥ For the Last Time ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: February 15, 2005 at 12:03 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.25 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 341 views
For the Last Time 
For the Last Time


She was leaving him for the last time,
“But Baby, I love you”
Opening the door to step out,
“Maybe you think you know what love is,
“And maybe you do”
And as she shut it behind her,
“But you don’t know how to love me.”

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612babygirl
February 23, 2011

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short but enjoyed reading this thanks for sharing!
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PoetryIsMySoul
February 26, 2005

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sweet lol but sad
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TempestOfNature
February 15, 2005

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Thats true about so many people...I felt that way also.What a better way in putting it short and simple..Nice work!!!..Ivie
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milligan
February 15, 2005

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Sounds like a familiar tune I've heard! Well said my friend!
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