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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: February 06, 2005 at 06:11 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 358 views

Undeniable  

Undeniable

It pounds on me
Itís all around on me
Your smell of wonder lust
And my essence of fairy dust

Iím found by you
Iím sound for you
I know your love is reliable
You say that I am undeniable




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Brian1750
February 14, 2005
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I like the poem. Its got a good structure and I like the terms and length of the poem. Great work! And hello to you poet, as I am a new member.


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Katela
February 14, 2005
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Very good! Excellent poem, keep up the good work


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February 13, 2005
great poem


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Zanlesan
February 10, 2005
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I like the way it flows, and the words used. And I feel it, too!


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February 06, 2005
nice rhymes Ivie!!


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