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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: February 01, 2005 at 03:31 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Humor | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.16 Stars by 6 users with 6 comments and 410 views

Other Peoples Couches  



Other Peoples Couches


Junk yard sale
All around my house,
I havenít read the mail,
Havenít fed the mouse.

Seeing stuff stacked,
All over the place,
Loose or in boxes,
Taking up all my space!

I go over to otherís houses,
To find some relief,
Enjoy the view from their couches
Oh, it always seems so brief

Donít get left out of this one,
Junk yard sale right here,
It may look strange to some,
But I think itís quite clear!

Junk yard sale,
Come on over,
All around my house,
Grows four-leaf clover

IĎm selling that too,
Just in case youĎve a wonder.
Junk yard sale at my house,
Where thereĎs everything but order!


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Comments & Reviews



MaryJane
February 02, 2005
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Haha that's a cute 1!


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drowning_in_you
February 01, 2005
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verry nice Ivie


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jzachmann
February 01, 2005
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YOu know, I never thought of it like that, but I sit on a lot of peoples couches. Thank you for sharing this piece...It shows the creative side of you.


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milligan
February 01, 2005
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Very funny, junk tends to reign here too! Well done, my friend!


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BobQuinn
February 01, 2005
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Ivie darlin'... your poems don't flow smoothly, their jerky rythum often makes them a chore to read, BUT.....That never detracts from the homespun wisdom and humor you manage to inject. Relating to the human side of your writing is as easy as tripping over piles of laundry. You remind me of Erma Bombeck, and I love it!!


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February 01, 2005
I like this, it has a nice simple humurous touch and I'm sure many can relate to this. It could apply to moving house or an actual junk yard sale-- actually, in my case, it could apply to my children's annihilation of my house on a frequent basis LOL


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