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♥ Aloof ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: January 23, 2005 at 06:50 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Non Fiction | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 311 views
Aloof 
Aloof

Can’t you see the sky is falling?
Right a top of our heads?
It’s awfully heavy stuff coming’ down!
Spattering all over and hitting the ground.

Gotta find some shelter!
Gotta get under a roof!
Gotta find some shelter!
Stop acting so aloof!

I can see it in your eyes,
That you can feel it too!
C’mon, come with me!
And we can go as two.

Gotta find some shelter!
Gotta get under a roof!
Gotta find some shelter!
And stop acting so aloof!

Can’t you see the sky is falling?
All around us pieces of sky fly by.
And still you just stand there,
Tears of earth's dust in your blind eyes?

Ivie Doe


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drowning_in_you
January 24, 2005

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Nice work Ivie
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