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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: January 23, 2005 at 12:18 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 372 views

The Prominent Phenomena  

The Prominent Phenomena

There are certain words that capture me,
Like a rabbit in a furriers trap,
Or a doe eyed deer in your headlights,
Or a motherless kitten in your lap.

Words, words, words,
Itís a world full of a wonderful phenomena
Snatched from the air everywhere
Some casual, some prominent
An exceptional necessity at times
And when seemingly not needed
Itís because theyíve been preceded
By some solid history of clues
Usually already picked up
By some superfluous cues



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April 28, 2008
serendipitiously sure
this is so true and yet so unheard


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Blindwriter
November 15, 2005
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Great job. Excellent.


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drowning_in_you
January 24, 2005
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great work...How long do you spend thinking about what you write?


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milligan
January 23, 2005
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Excellent my friend! Great writing!


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BobQuinn
January 23, 2005
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As a fellow wordsmith I find this one delightful!! At first I thought it was about something else that is delightful as well but after reading it I see you have something more substantial in mind. (and longer lasting)This is sort of what I was getting at in the introduction in my book.Glad you like it. Words are the most enduring and powerful things people will ever produce and I'm delighted to be here among folks who know that. Well done iviedoe.


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