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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: January 23, 2005 at 12:15 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 450 views

Mercury  

Mercury


Letís coming right out in the open
Most hopefully, slick, thick and sublime
In need for some pitiful rhyme.
Please lend me your hand
While I attempt an explanation
And letís come to an understanding
Instead of bewildered exasperation
And the beholding implications
Of what was being thought
Versus what was being taught

Now words are just tumbling out
All over the place
Up through my throat
Over my lips
And splattering your face
But, still I must submit my case.

These words, words, words
Are only resounding
And my head is absolutely pounding
Itís just that this isnít sounding
The way that I would will
Even when thought out and written by quill
Words they do fail us at times
Even when thought out
And written in sweet little rhymes

Or is it just me
That canít bring them as far
As they could really go?
This Iím sure is probably so.

But I know what I feel
Inside my heart
The emotions that sir
The motions that start
Could make me speak words
That could take you so far
And would outshine any star



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Comments & Reviews



drowning_in_you
January 24, 2005
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Looks like somebody has been really busy as of late...Look at all these poems I get to read!


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BobQuinn
January 23, 2005
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You on a roll today lady!! Words, wonderful words, they are our tools, for good or ill we use them to shape our thoughts and emotions. Not always perfect, true. Keep trying to find just the right mix, like Lacy J. Dalton sang: "...some golden words rolled off of someone's tongue. Then for awhile they'll go in style.."


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