♥ Mercury ♥
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Author:
iviedoeloves
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| Created: January 23, 2005 at 12:15 pm |
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Entry Type:
Poem, G (All)
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| Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other |
| Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 420 views |
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Mercury 
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Mercury
Let’s coming right out in the open
Most hopefully, slick, thick and sublime
In need for some pitiful rhyme.
Please lend me your hand
While I attempt an explanation
And let’s come to an understanding
Instead of bewildered exasperation
And the beholding implications
Of what was being thought
Versus what was being taught
Now words are just tumbling out
All over the place
Up through my throat
Over my lips
And splattering your face
But, still I must submit my case.
These words, words, words
Are only resounding
And my head is absolutely pounding
It’s just that this isn’t sounding
The way that I would will
Even when thought out and written by quill
Words they do fail us at times
Even when thought out
And written in sweet little rhymes
Or is it just me
That can’t bring them as far
As they could really go?
This I’m sure is probably so.
But I know what I feel
Inside my heart
The emotions that sir
The motions that start
Could make me speak words
That could take you so far
And would outshine any star
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