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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: January 17, 2005 at 10:40 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.71 Stars by 7 users with 7 comments and 894 views

Sweet Spot  

Sweet Spot


No sudden moves
With me please
Just grinds and grooves
And a bit of tease




© iviedoeloves - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews



Zanlesan
February 10, 2005
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It's really short, but I love it! It's amazing that it can stand as it can, without more added, and be enough.


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February 06, 2005
I really enjoy reading you erotic poems... they have a sense of humor to them and I like the story within them also... great job!!


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MaryJane
January 18, 2005
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Very good, I really like it!


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brokenhearted
January 18, 2005
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Love this one too!


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BobQuinn
January 18, 2005
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ooo...ooo...short and to the point, I like.


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drowning_in_you
January 18, 2005
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as always an amazing display of your poetic versitility and creative genious


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January 17, 2005
Hey Ivie... short but I like it a lot!! you got some great rhymes


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