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♥ Sweet Spot ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: January 17, 2005 at 10:40 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.71 Stars by 7 users with 7 comments 890 views

Sweet Spot 
Sweet Spot


No sudden moves
With me please
Just grinds and grooves
And a bit of tease



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Comments & Reviews

Zanlesan
February 10, 2005

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It's really short, but I love it! It's amazing that it can stand as it can, without more added, and be enough.

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February 06, 2005

I really enjoy reading you erotic poems... they have a sense of humor to them and I like the story within them also... great job!!

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MaryJane
January 18, 2005

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Very good, I really like it!

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brokenhearted
January 18, 2005

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Love this one too!

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BobQuinn
January 18, 2005

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ooo...ooo...short and to the point, I like.

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drowning_in_you
January 18, 2005

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as always an amazing display of your poetic versitility and creative genious

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January 17, 2005

Hey Ivie... short but I like it a lot!! you got some great rhymes

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