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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: January 17, 2005 at 10:38 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.12 Stars by 8 users with 8 comments and 444 views

Spree  

Spree


Baby don’t be fooled by this cool demeanor-
I am the watcher,
And I’m betting you’re a screamer!
I moan low,
You groan slow,
And I know,
We could make sweet sexy music-
Together,


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Comments & Reviews


February 06, 2005
I've read these before but I dont think I ever critiqued them... I really like the first 3 lines of this one!!


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Katela
January 20, 2005
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Pretty good, you did a nice job


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agreatpoetj06
January 19, 2005
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didn't quite get it


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MaryJane
January 18, 2005
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Hmmmm I like!


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brokenhearted
January 18, 2005
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LOVE IT! Keep it up!


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BobQuinn
January 18, 2005
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Rated PG 13


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drowning_in_you
January 18, 2005
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Even the simplest of poems can creat such a descriptive image...Nice work Ivie


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January 17, 2005
Very nice... I like it!


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