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♥ Spree ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: January 17, 2005 at 10:38 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.12 Stars by 8 users with 8 comments 425 views

Spree 
Spree


Baby don’t be fooled by this cool demeanor-
I am the watcher,
And I’m betting you’re a screamer!
I moan low,
You groan slow,
And I know,
We could make sweet sexy music-
Together,

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Comments & Reviews
February 06, 2005

I've read these before but I dont think I ever critiqued them... I really like the first 3 lines of this one!!

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Katela
January 20, 2005

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Pretty good, you did a nice job

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agreatpoetj06
January 19, 2005

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didn't quite get it

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MaryJane
January 18, 2005

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Hmmmm I like!

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brokenhearted
January 18, 2005

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LOVE IT! Keep it up!

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BobQuinn
January 18, 2005

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Rated PG 13

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drowning_in_you
January 18, 2005

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Even the simplest of poems can creat such a descriptive image...Nice work Ivie

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January 17, 2005

Very nice... I like it!

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