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♥ Sapient ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: January 15, 2005 at 02:02 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Non Fiction | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 271 views
Sapient 
Sapient

I’ve seen life almost pass me by,
But learned how to laugh,
And that it was o.k. to cry.
Wondered and supped at so many tables,
Of truths, lies and, fables.
Trying to find the reasons why,
Life is neither complete nor fun,
Underneath my personal sun.
So I grabbed love by the heals,
And made it something real,
Made it a thing that reveals,
The best in me,
When I’m at my worst.
And the worst in me at my best.
That was my test, you see,
Of what true love is for me.
And even after all that,
That love would still be,
Open to the truth of serendipity.
Knowing freedom and spontaneity,
Seeking and finding it at times with me.
And not just that but true liberty,
As one,
Underneath our personal sun.

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Indigo
January 16, 2005

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Great ending! very well written!
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drowning_in_you
January 15, 2005

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Much like the one before it this was a little hard to pull the message out of but still i was able to do so with this piece. You are a true master of this armt Ivie and it is an honor to see that you take an intrest in what I write.
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January 15, 2005
I like the rhyming scheme...
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BobQuinn
January 15, 2005

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Chock full o' wisdom, both ancient and modern. You are a learned poet iviedoe.
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