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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: January 15, 2005 at 02:00 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Non Fiction | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 435 views



Ive been sold on so many things,
About life, love and,
That illusive brass ring.
Id like to grab that last one mentioned,
And move on to collect my-
This time around pension.
For it would be just a chapter won,
Not all would quite be said and done.
Id like to then move on to another surprise.
For life has my eyes,
So full of their size.
Drowning in them as they rise,
And shine up to greet me.
To a fine set up theyll seat me.
Where I can listen and learn,
How to better discern,
What spirits are concerned,
With what I will,
And will not do.
Im just like most of you,
Longing to be more,
Leaving this world,
Better than before.

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January 15, 2005
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Hmmm...You poetic genious has surpassed my knowledge. I find it a little hard to decypher what it is you are trying to say. Despite not knowing what ti si you are talking about here I will say that it reads pretty well as far as rythem and such goes.

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January 15, 2005
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Well done, my friend, beautifully expressed!

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January 15, 2005
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You have already made the world a better place, bless you. Those spirit helpers must be hovering close when you write things like this.

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