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♥ The Sacred Sum ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: January 04, 2005 at 05:59 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Lyrics | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.8 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments 469 views

The Sacred Sum 
The Sacred Sum


My eyes taking only you in
Grateful, gorgeous, and graciousness
Is all about you and within

Letting and liking me being me
Hopeful, helpful, and happily
Blissfully listening to my poetry
..................................
We've been together forever for years to come
With each and the other becoming as one
With each the other becoming as one
...................................
I'll be loving you for the rest of my life
You keep me living and laughing
And lacking in dark strife

For your love abounds unabated to me
Attracted, attending, and attuned
Concerned and connected to my security
.....................................
Yes, we'll be together forever
For more years to come
With each the other becoming as one
Becoming as one
The whole of the parts a sacred sum
When becoming as one
.....................................
We're loving the already been there
(When becoming as one)
We're longing for the not yet seen
(when becoming as one)
We're living to make the most of us
(becoming the greater sum)
During the infinite of the in between
(becoming the sacred sum of one)
....................................
Yes, we've been together forever
(So many nows Being one)
And we'll be together
For more years to come
(So many nows being one)
So many nows being one
....................................
The sacred sum
The sacred sum
The greater sacred sum of one is seen
During the infinite of the in between
Air and opportunity glean
During the infinite of the in between
Now
Now
Now
Now
Now

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

AncientOne
August 16, 2008

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Great!
This was absolutely great ~thanks for my critique~Kim

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BobQuinn
January 15, 2005

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Gonna be a GREAT song!!

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milligan
January 15, 2005

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Lovely words with special feeling expressed from the heart!

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drowning_in_you
January 04, 2005

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As always your work takes the words right out of me

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brokenhearted
January 04, 2005

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WOW! This is an awesome song! (I think it says it's lyrics) If it's not a song it should be!

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