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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 29, 2004 at 08:01 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 640 views

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Read my poem dear and i'll read yours
We'll give each other starry little scores
And let me just say to you
For you, could they ever mean as much as they do
To me??
I doubt it you see...
Some have chosen to not recieve critiques
What does that say about one who lives for them
Like little ol' me!
Soft of heart or just plain weak???
What does mean more is
I've made a friend or three
Yes compared to stars
They mean so much more to me!

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January 15, 2005
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You have spoken for many of us who are fishing for compliments, showing off, cringing and crying or just accepting it. The smart ones will improve.

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