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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 29, 2004 at 07:42 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Dark | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.33 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 443 views


I'd like to be able to write,
Something lacking with the spite,
I feel.
It's to real,
And it smells like rot gut.
I'm in a rut,
Of staring at that deaf dumb and blind mime,
In the mirror.
Her eyes are death lurking up on me,
Maybe the meds aren't working today,
Maybe tomorrow it will all be o.k.....
Maybe death will finally prevail...
For nobody sails...
No one fails like me.
It doesn't look like a happy sappy,
Sort of day to write-
But I'll be o.k.
I'll be alright.

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June 22, 2008
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its a little mixed up, but every one has this happen

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January 15, 2005
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We all have days like this, I'm going to post mine called "The Blues" watch for it.

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December 31, 2004
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Yet again proving the versitility of your amazing talent

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