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♥ Leaving Together ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: December 29, 2004 at 07:11 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 3.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 377 views

Leaving Together 
Going Together

Someday soon our time will come,
To wave good-bye at the setting sun.
I can only pray that we'll leave together,
Into that land of heaven to live forever.

It's just that I don't want
To have to do without you
For any anount of time down here
The moments I don't think about you are none if few
And it would be tortrue to have to live without you, my dear

Do you understand I'm not being sad,
I know you'd be with Our Lord,
And for you I'd be happy and glad.
Yes, but as for me,
It'd just be a matter of time,
To wait, wait and see.
To do at all without you,
To hug and talk to,
Would be misery.
Would make me more than blue.
I love you.
I love you.
I love you.

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December 31, 2004

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Always a pleasure to read your work Ivie

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December 30, 2004

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the starting was great, but you didn't keep up with the vibe. Make sure you proof read it. It is a really really nice poem. Keep up the good work!!!

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December 29, 2004

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Powerful feelings, well said! Great writing!

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