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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 24, 2004 at 08:55 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Spiritual | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 416 views

He Took the Rap  

He Took the Rap

The price of sin is death,
So before you take
Your last breath,

~~Go to Jesus~~

He stands in the gap,
Yes, He died for all sins.
He took the whole rap.


And now He's calling.
His voice is so sweet.
And wherever you stand; too,
He will come to meet you.

The whereabouts of Jesus,
Is simply just this;
He is here with us now-
Every place, and any how


No matter how bad you think you've been-
Or how good you've convinced yourself to be-
Ask Him to reveal Himself,
And you'll finally see,
Just who you are~~
And who you could really be!

ivie doe

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January 16, 2005
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Very nice work!

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December 25, 2004
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though I am of verry little faith I will still say that this is good work.

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