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♥ Personal Parcel ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: December 21, 2004 at 11:07 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Humor | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 424 views
Personal Parcel 
A Personal Parcel

I'm your little bundle,
Of silky softness and joy.
All cuddled up into a personal parcel,
just for you,my special boy.

For you I am the triple threat,
Beauty, brains and wit I bet,
That cuts straight to the core.
Belly full, but wanting more.

After this day,
You won't be able to forget.
Even tho, I know, like you say,
We just met.

But there's something deep down inside of you,
That will make you ever want to,
Have me, know me, do me.
Else you'll find yourself so lonely.

I like that,
Being a trick of the hat
I'll just tell you now that I'm the best.
And humbly modest, or hadn't you guessed!

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emk69
August 15, 2008

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Very good
Very well put love the end
very enjoyable
Bravo
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milligan
December 22, 2004

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Well said, my dear and fun!
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