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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 21, 2004 at 03:27 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments and 597 views

Barstool Beggin  

~~Barstool Beggin'~~

Your arrival was timely,
Subtle approach with spoken words,
That so very sublimely-
Convey your barely covered lust.
All for you're shay-shay girlie-girlie
In twirly whirl speak.
I say "Damn boy,You look like
You're about to peak...
Right here in front of me!"
Oh yeah!!!And all of these
Goosey necked lookey-loo's,
Checkin' us out to see
Just what it seems
We may shortly be up to,
With our goo-goo's and giggles
Stand there like that, yeah,
So I can back up to you in sassy little wiggles.
I'll plant my cute little tush on your 'button fly's',
It's no surprise,That our audience somehow
Has saucer eyes!
I tell you no lies,
I mean business right now!Just tell me you've got
A better offer elsewhere,
And I promise you a cat fight fought,
Right here or anywhere!
Now just let me snuggle right here on your lap.
Never mind the panties cutie,Just pull over,
That flossy strap!
Sweet charming man let me just ask you this,
With my ass in your lap,doesn't my baby-doll face
Deserve a hard wet kiss?
There's really no pressure,It's no big decision.
We'll learn together slowly,
How to do it with precision.
Hopefully one thing will lead to another,
Like breathing in and out-It's a natural thing,
My sweet, Big brother.
Oh, is that you asking for more?
Something different?
Or another, just as before?
I was imagining my sweet little muzzle,
Softly burrying itself to nuzzle,
In your pocket full of berries-
And your stiff chubby elf!
You are such a treat,To me, you are God's gift.
You're taste is so sweet,I can't get enough wiffs
Of your smell.
And do tell...
You've no faux pax cologne,You are au naturel...
If you'll be my beau,Then I'll be your belle.
And the rest of those sniffers,
Can go to, well....
They can go anywhere,anywhere but with us.
So listen,there's no fuss,
I've Just a slick little muss,
So while you sit here on this stool,
Let me back up my little bus,
And try not to drool.
Now lift my skirt a little bit,with your hand,
Just follow my crack to my soft wet slit.
No worries baby,no ones gonna see.
I want to get some of you,Up inside of me!
Just suave in the head now,
I'll take it right here...
And so what? It's just a bar...The worst we'll get
Is 86'd outta here.
And the best will be,One humungous cheer!!!
Just a little naughty meet and greet,
Until the farm is bought,
Or at least 'till we get caught.
Whichever or whoever,Cums first.
In no particular order,
Just make sure the other,
Cums last.
But this bar's startin'To get crowded,
So let's make it sorta fast!
Better yet,Whatta ya' bet,
There's big ol' locks
On the bathroom doors?
It may be a little dirty,
So just don't lick the floors!
Put me on the counter top,unzip, slip, and pippity-pop...
You're in like flynn,again and again!
So take my hand and don't worry Bumble-Bee
You know better than To doubt little ol' me!
Your baby-girl wants you!
Just like I always do.
And I got ideas a flowin'...Just like the wettness
Thru my panties showing...
Anyway, we own this joint,
They know us here.Let me make my point.
Like this my dear...
Yeah, now you got it just like that...
You just bought the cow you breezy tom-cat!
Baby, you're so bad,And I'm so good,
No that didn't come out,the way it should.
This time it's me,In this puplic place,
Gettin' all up in your face,
About being naughty,Gettin' haughty...
It must be me that's being Badder than little ol' you!!!
You got me beggin'to get my legs in,
Some spread eagle position.
You're so good,I got a terminal condition.
I wanna grab tonight's Brass ring...
And here the nightbird sing.
Now come on,Let's go try that bathroom thing!!!

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February 07, 2005
WOW Ivie... so Intense. WOW WOW WOW! I could read that over and over... put some ideas in my

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December 22, 2004

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December 22, 2004
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Holy shit...thats some great writing. You are so good.

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December 21, 2004
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Very sexy, but well said!

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December 21, 2004
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Dear Ivie, as much as I enjoy your work. I would prefer it in a smaller dose. Try to hold in down on the amount you are feeding as at one time. I know you are a very passionate woman and I can appericate the fact, still I is more than most can stand in one dose.
Take Care

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December 21, 2004
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! What more can I day. FANTASTIC JOB!!!

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