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A Poem by carolann

Author: carolann
Created: February 15, 2007 at 10:53 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 353 views

Before You Go  

Let a snowflake land upon you're nose
feel it tickle right down to you're toes,
On a summers day,play outside in the rain
put out you're tongue taste its droplets again,
Take a walk go pick fresh flowers in the park
or just sit quietly and listen to a meadowlark,
climb up a tree,sit where no one can see you
look down on the world,you'll love the view,
lie in a field of fresh cut grass,and smell
Take a romp on the beach,the sights are swell,
eat a hot dog and some fries,do not foget a coke
Now take a look around,everything is oke doke,
remember you are loved,give some of it back
and in life,friends you'll never lack.

CAROLANN 2/15/07

© carolann - all rights reserved

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November 22, 2009
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Such a sweet poem. We all should take the time to enjoy the simple pleasures in life. There is nothing wrong with relaxing and being a person who loves to love life. There are very many simple pleasures in life just waiting to be taken advantage of and the best thing of all, it's all for FREE!! I liked your poem very well. Keep Writing!

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February 02, 2008
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i love it so true your words are

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February 16, 2007
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beautiful so true

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February 15, 2007
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A wise sentimate we should take to heart, good write

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