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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 03, 2004 at 04:01 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 582 views


This is my oasis,
No matter where your face is,
I'll be in all those right places...
Deeply adoring the hottest of chases.

All these words and still it's jut this:
I'm loving the arrival of our next kiss.

Yet it's getting so late
And I can barely wait
To once again to no unend
Undo the latches to our passion's gate

And also once again,
My most cherished friend,
To be with you,
Whom God most certainly did send
To me,amen.

Until then,
I move slowly thru the moments when,
This excruciating separation-
We do finally suspend.

Our breath will mingle,
Oh the thoughts make me tingle,
And our two worlds become one-
One moon and one sun.

For no one should have to live thru this,
Waiting for and wanting-
That sacred next kiss.

© iviedoeloves - all rights reserved

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December 03, 2004
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Very good poem, keep up the good work

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December 03, 2004
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I can tell you have a lot of talent. I am glad that you have joined us. You will be a welcome addition to your little family of Poets.
Take Care

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December 03, 2004
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Lovely poem Ivie. I really enjoyed it. Well done.

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