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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 01, 2004 at 08:22 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 412 views

Ultra Vagrant Motivater  

Doll face, such grace
Walking around like you know not,
Just what sort of picture you're painting,
And just what sort of thoughts we got,
About you doll face.
Loving the chase.
You seem so unaware
That everyone in here is wondering dear,
"What does she have on under there?"
"what color is her underwear?"
You look like the type
Of girl in a whirl
"what should I wear today?"
But that's not what your eyes say.
With our apple eyes we all fantasize,
That surely the colors are true.
That purely the spectrum of hues,
Are delightful,
And it's somewhat frightful,
That you could naturally do,
What it takes others weeks to.
Not even made up that much,
Not a bunch.
Your style is all in your smile.
You even rhyme with metre and time,
As you talk,and even your walk
makes the sun shine brighter.
Tho your clothes are no more tighter,
Than any other girlie-girl in here.
And for this reason,
You look like a fresh season,
Of earth water and air.
Let me be the one for you to share.
Let me be the one to show you I care.
While I'm loving the smell
Of your beautiful hair.
Peas in a pod, a perfect pair.


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cheruboverme
December 01, 2004
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