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♥ Sanctuary ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: November 29, 2004 at 12:57 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 333 views
Sanctuary 
A desert oasis,
When the sun is most high.
Warm sunny spaces,
After a storm passes by.
Cool splashy places,
A pool and a chase-lounge just nigh.
Keeping up with the paces,
Tho' you think you might die!
Rounding all the bases,
On an "outta-the-park" pop fly.
Seeing where the end of the race is,
And a slow wave Bye-Bye.
Not just the lies, but thier traces,
Eyes swollen, but swearing not to cry.
Smiling kind faces,
After a long deserved sigh.
In fine crystal vases,
Fresh frilly flowers so shy.
Silk Italian laces,
For your one and only special guy!
Showing others God's graces,
And shedding truth on the lie.

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milligan
November 29, 2004

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You've beautifully captured a moment in time! Well done!
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lemmen
November 29, 2004

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I enjoyed this write good job.
~DENNIS~
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Jodi
November 29, 2004

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Very descriptive. I love this, original work!!
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