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♥ Wake ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: November 23, 2004 at 02:22 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 355 views

Wake 
Some days feel like minutes
That cluster swiftly into hours,
And I wake up to see,
Weeks months and years
Are flying slowly by me...
If love or the lack of it
Was my scenes dis-ease,
Causing my sense of time to cease-
It would honestly be
Because of what I see about me
Seed, Time, and Harvest-
It's only a matter
Of when and where in time-
You'll rise to find,
You're weak, malnourished and impoverished.
This is sowing and reaping-
Giving and keeping-
Waking and sleeping.
All I do and say-
In each and every day
No matter if I stay-
Or if I'm going, going, gone, and go-
This is reaping what I sow-
It's law and factual
Be it friend or foe.
I learn it over and over-
By now I should know.
All I give out or just let flow
Will increase and return,
And to all it will show,
Just what I've been giving
On any given day,
Or all I've stolen along the way.
But oh the time...I've let blow away!

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Comments & Reviews

kelli
August 16, 2008

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good write
i can relate to it

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Koffee
November 23, 2004

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this is a very thought- provoking piece... i enjoyed being sucked in.. it makes u think about life and how u live it...

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Katela
November 23, 2004

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Very intresting poem, good job

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