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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: November 23, 2004 at 01:48 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments and 329 views

Over You  

Blue,Blue,Blue-
Is me over you.
Never before have I felt so lazy.
Things that came before,
Are much to hazy.
And do me no good right now.
I'm only certain,
That I'm not sure how
Or why
The sky-
Is so Blue,blue,blue.
As blue as I am,
Over you.


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November 25, 2004
I like this one, it's short and sweet. great job


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Koffee
November 23, 2004
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i had to read this one again.. i really liked this...


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Koffee
November 23, 2004
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i liked this poem


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Katela
November 23, 2004
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Very nice poem, you have a knack


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