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♥ -xXx- The Zipper _xXx- ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: October 22, 2006 at 07:58 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Fantasy | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.28 Stars by 7 users with 7 comments 385 views

-xXx- The Zipper _xXx- 
-xXx- The Zipper–xXx-

I’d like to spend some quiet time together
So please leave the breakfast dishes for later
This is precious time when we can get dirty together
And I promise there are no dish eating alligators


So I’d like to go to the riverbanks near
I’ll meet you there while digging clams
And promise me you won’t be long dear
Now that you’ve been apprized of where I am.


I’ll be there thinking all about us
With every push of the big digging spoon
And how beautiful everything really is
With you in the morning, twilight and the moon

I got it in my head to fashion a zipper
Just above the tips of your heart
I could climb in and zip it shut
And never again fret about being apart

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Comments & Reviews

vivididol
May 29, 2010

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there seem 2 b 3 different poems here? you take of using precious time to get dirty together then but head off instead in the next verse to dig clams? bizarre lol. the 3rd poem is the last verse which has a truly beautiful image of the heart zipper ....i would have liked to have read that poem : )

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TempestOfNature
April 09, 2007

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i Love this poem ahh true love and its mysteries of bliss yet it's comforting to know that there's someone out there that's meant to be with you...

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Katela
January 20, 2007

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An intresting sentiment, but romantic all the same. Good job

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drowning_in_you
December 29, 2006

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quite nice

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brokenhearted
November 21, 2006

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Awe! This is so sweet!!!! I love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's one of your best in my opinion! :-)

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MELONIE
October 22, 2006

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good write

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lynnmarie
October 22, 2006

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Wow! your words are rich in details and the emotions are very tender sprinkled with a wee bit of humour & i was so drawn in with the clam digging & nature references. very cleverly written; i love the zipper idea & it is my absolute pleasure to read such a gorgeous and emotionally fulfilling poem!
lynn
p.s. the picture is gorgeous too!

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