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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: November 22, 2004 at 11:17 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Humor | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 393 views

Water Water  

Water, water
Smooth as silk.
Chlorine filled,
Or packed with silt!
Clubhouse pool,
Or swimming hole digs.
Kids and dogs love this gig!
Spring to sing,
Summer's as hummer,
Fall's a ball!
Runts seem tall-
And chores seem small,
When the water slaps and
Kisses your skin,
There's no other hole you'd rather be in!


© iviedoeloves - all rights reserved


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davidjshock
August 16, 2008
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Very good and funny!!!


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GarrettE
March 23, 2007
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i like it. very expressive.


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Katela
December 07, 2004
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Very good! you made my laugh awesome poem!


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