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♥ -oOo- Fabulous -oOo- ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: October 18, 2006 at 09:00 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments 336 views

-oOo- Fabulous -oOo- 
-oOo- Fabulous -oOo-

Fabulous is my existence,
For God has formed me whole.
I have all my fingers and toes,
And thereís not much the enemy has stole.

It all kooks pretty bright from where I stand,
Tho I do find myself at sometimes at unrest;
But I am certain God is watching over me,
So my chin is up as Iím doing my best.

Yes, my world it rocks!
And even thru the rolls
I havenít found myself lately
In any seriously dangerous foxholes.

I believe Iím actually doing pretty well;
Considering the state of the world and its mind.
I always help myself to a rhythm or a rhyme;
Gets it all out, and soothes me somehow, is what I find


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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

Katela
February 06, 2007

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You may want to change kooks to looks (2nd stanza)I liked it, an inspirational pickmeup. Great job!

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Katela
January 20, 2007

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I agree totally, very well expressed, Great job Ivie!

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MELONIE
October 19, 2006

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Mere words cannot describe your poetry as you write with such eloquence and beauty. THank you for sharing your work.

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MaryJane
October 19, 2006

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I love your style! This poem managed to bring my spirits up!! Excellent work, keep writing!

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BobQuinn
October 18, 2006

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The rhymes are there even if the rythm is not, but wow! are the words to die for, yes indeed you nailed the attitude Ivedoe. Nice one.

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